The Grey Goth, Page 3

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Olivia kneels on the floor dramatically upset, holding the grey coat. Her mother (blonde, wearing a blazer and pearls) looks at her with concern.

MOTHER: "What's wrong, dear?"

OLIVIA: "It's not supposed to be grey! It looked black online!"

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The mother speaks firmly while Olivia continues to pout.

MOTHER: "You'll have to wear it anyway. It is a functional coat, after all."

OLIVIA: "Mooooooom..."

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Caption: "The next day..."

At the bus stop. Olivia stands wearing the grey coat with buttons done up formally. Other students in grey coats (including a goth girl with striped sleeves and a boy with messy hair) look at her.

STUDENT: "What?"

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Close-up of Olivia smirking confidently, surrounded by impressed-looking students, still at the bus stop marked "BUS."

OLIVIA: "Grey is the new black!"

Text: "The End"

Copyright © 2006 Rachel Nabors For more comics and art, visit me at SubcultureofOne.com!

Damn, the boy on the left is cute. Why didn’t I bring him back? And why do I keep making comments like this?

Comments (Archived)

  1. Sakebottleswing

    That wool is going to keep her nice and warm in the winter. I hope she’ll that warmth is worth it!